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JustBecause
06-27-2008, 04:57 AM
I'm in the smoky central valley, with fires to the north and west - the smog is so thick and close to the ground. The smell of smoke is everywhere.

News is on the TV about the floods in the Missippi River valley. I can't help thinking about those of us who must cope with loss or rebuild from far less than what we had before. So, I've written In Our Hands.

Earthquakes, hurricanes,
Fire and flood.
Wars raging everywhere,
Wasting innocent blood.

Are there any among us
Who can turn the tide?
Are we too self-focused,
Just along for the ride?

We can reach out to each other,
Or try to go it alone.
We can come together - heal our world,
Or let our hearts turn to stone.

It's in our hands.

hcla
06-27-2008, 04:38 PM
Thats beautiful....with thunderstorms and lightening warnings here...in effect through sunday....extreme fire watch..we too may soon suffer what so many are trying to cope with...I will put it in his hands.

Littledevil
06-28-2008, 01:02 AM
Beautiful!!!! If we all reached out even a little bit, it would help!

Amarnagrape
06-29-2008, 01:15 AM
JB, have you had any writings published? That's a great poem.

JustBecause
06-29-2008, 04:43 AM
Ladies, Thanks for reading it and I'm glad you liked it.

Hcla, I totally agree about his hands.

LD, I knew you are an angel in disguise! ;)

AG, nope - never been published. Maybe one day... :)

destiny
06-29-2008, 05:06 AM
That's beautiful, JustBecause. You should try to get published. I've seen work not as good as yours on the shelf at a bookstore where I once worked.

And, to everyone that is facing and going through hardships right now, may you and your loved ones be safe from harm. Take care.

renate
06-29-2008, 06:45 AM
where is this at??

Renate

JustBecause
06-30-2008, 02:37 AM
Thank you destiny. We're safe from the fire in this county. People with respiratory issues had to be careful, though.

Renate, there were wild fires burning in the California counties of Humboldt, Butte and Napa last week, producing smoke that covered most of the central valley - including Sacramento county where we live.

Sam
07-01-2008, 09:04 AM
:) Nice poem Just Because. Stay Safe.

Amarnagrape
07-02-2008, 05:59 PM
I'm supposed to be going to the wine country next month with my husband and his family. How far are you from Sonoma, JB?

JustBecause
07-02-2008, 10:01 PM
I'm supposed to be going to the wine country next month with my husband and his family. How far are you from Sonoma, JB?

Oh, about 100 - 150 miles, depending on which part.

Akashary
07-08-2008, 06:00 PM
Nice done , JustBecause, and so true....Akashary