Akashary`s Poetry...

[Akashary]

Hi there everyone.....

I have not been here in the forum long, but here are so many creative people so I thought , I´ll give it a try too. I`m writing poetry for a few years, cause a friend challenged me and I would be glad about your comments and what you think about it, `cause I´m German and write in english I would appreciate your opinions.So for the first time I `ll give you three poems to read ...thanx ....Akashary

Elements[U]

My eyes are water
They spill it everywhere
Like a heavy rain
Drowning me
On a summer day

My mouth is earth
Growing all the words
Suddenly coming out
Like a sandstorm
In the Sahara desert

My hands are fire
Burning their marks
On whatever they touch
Like a flash
Coming down on a tree

My soul is air
Not easy to feel
Even harder to catch
Like a whisper
Following the wind

Elements
Enchanting my body
Leaving me
Like a house
Crashed by a tornado

Only ruins remain


[U]Behind[U]

Silent
Is my voice
Silent
Are my thoughts
Only in my eyes
You`ll find written
What I´m singing
To your mind
So...
Go on...go deeper
Cause there`s so much
You can find...
Behind


[U]Unwritten

These words in my heart
The ones hidden
So deep
That even I
Can`t find them
Lines of untold stories
Kept inside...and
From deep within
These words eat me up
Through walls
Through flesh and bones
Heart, mind and soul
Destroying me
Slowly
These words...that are
Unwritten

[JustBecause]

My favorite is Unwritten. :)

[Amarnagrape]

Ooh... I also like Unwritten. Very deep.

[pukkie]

I like them all,
It is not always easy to me,good reading English. and understand everthing.

I live in Netherland and speak Dutch.

[Akashary]

Thank you JustBecause, Amarnagrape and pukkie for your kind replies.
I hope I can bother you again with other poems another time...:D

Akashary;)

[Lt.Mac]

There's some pretty awesome writing here :D

[StephyC]

Those are really great. So many deep emotions captured in a few brief lines.:)
Thanks for sharing them with us.

[Sam]

:D I love all three of them but Elements is my favorite. Thank you for sharing them. I love poetry.

[Akashary]

Thank you, Lt. Mac, StephyC and cocoknight....:):):)

... that were really nice and supportive replies.

Don`t have that much time at the moment, but I have more and would be glad to share them too...next time....!

Akashary;)

[appeace]

WOW! What talent:D
Yet, Another wonderfully expressive AP fan!

[Akashary]

Thank you appeace......:)

Here I have some more to read....


STILL (a lullaby)

The scent of you
Still in the air
As memory
Of what we shared
The touch of your hands
Still on my skin
Your kisses, I remember
From deep within
The breeze
Of your heavy breath
Still on my face
When we`re together
In a sweet embrace
Your arms around me
Your lips on my neck
Your fingers, so tender
Still cosing my back

So sleep, my love
Sleep tight
We`re still together
In our dreams
Tonight


ONE TO ANOTHER

Blinded by myself
Within words, so hollow
Gliding through the night
Compared, with my mind
Seduced by the voice
Of my own
Then realizing...
It`s me,
Speaking these words
And now...
Being awake
I can still hear
And feel
That question I`ve answered
Asked by someone
In my dreams
One soul to another
Your heart to mine
Have you heard...
The answere?


THROUGH MY HANDS

You`re like sand
One amazing beach
But millions
Of different pieces
And when I reach for it
It`s running...
Through my hands

You`re like water
A wonderful ocean
Powerful and strong
So much life in it
Always moving, never fading
But when I reach for it
It`s running...
Through my hands

You are not to keep
By these hands
Of mine


...Well, I hope you enjoy them...I`ve put some on with romance this time, as you may have realized....Akashary:rolleyes:

[pukkie]

I, like them all.writing with much emotions.
Thanks.

[JustBecause]

Hard to pick a favorite...would love to read more. :)

[Akashary]

Give me some time and I´ll give you some more....just have to check out which one it will be..:D

Akashary

[Akashary]

Well, it`s me again and I have some more for the ones who want and like to read them....their the latest 3 poems I wrote....

MEMORIES OF A FORGOTTEN FUTURE

I remember you
In my future
I`ve forgotten
You are past
I remember love
In it`s nature
I`ve forgotten
What it was
Memories of time
Confusing my mind
Future or past
Forgotten
At last


SWEET LITTLE DEATH

There it is again
All it needed
Was a dream and
A thought
Stalking my mind again
Step by step
Urging my feelings
To start
Unwanted it happens...
Again
Knowing I`m falling
Apart
Enchanting my blood
Whispering to my heart
Again and again and...
AGAIN!


BEING ROBBED

When I try to
Tell you about
That kind of feeling
The words I build in
My mouth
Escape my mind just
Before I want to
Speak them
And all you see
Are open lips
And all you hear
Is nothing at all...

When I try to
Show you about
That kind of feeling
My body starts to awake
Muscles are ready
To move
In my mind I walk
Straight to you
But all you see ...is
A woman stunned
Like a statue
Staring at you
Not moving at all...

You robbed me of...
Being a
Selfconfindent woman
And left a
Little teenage girl...
Behind

Thief!


....that`s it. May your fantasy do the rest.....:D

Akashary;)

[JustBecause]

BEING ROBBED is full of pain. I hope it comes only from your imagination. :) They are all wonderful - as usual...

[Akashary]

Thanx JustBecause, you are always kind with me :), but it`s mostly no fantasy but real feelings I write about....it seems I need an emonational kick!:D

Akashary;)

[Lt.Mac]

Writing poetry can be very theraputic, I know.that's why I started writing ten years ago.
It forces you to not just vaguely let the feelings out but to focus on specific details of an emotion while you're looking for just that right word or phrase. a poem about something that frightened you for example, did something really terrify you or just startle you? in a diary you can say 'I was so scared' but in a poem you are forced to identify the specific emotion instead of just an umbrella one.

[Akashary]

Couldn`t have said it better, Lt.Mac!!:)

Writing poetry and songs is my way to let all out instead of instoring all these feelings, emotions from anger to love. Keeps me from exploding .....:eek:

Akashary;)

[Sam]

Akashary I really am enjoying your poetry. If you get it published in book form please let me know. I'd love to buy that book.;)

[Akashary]

Dear cocoknight....that are really wonderful words of you and they make me feel great....you made my day. I never thought of going to be published, cause it`s quite dificult when living in Germany and writing in English...not even most of my friends can read (...or understand!) my poetry...that`s why I´m so pleased I can test it here in the forum....by the way "Thanx Adrian..":D....so I think there will never be a book, but I will continue to post my poetry here, so you can read and enjoy it...thanx to all who click here and read it...

So, I wasn`t here for quite a while , but I have some more to share....


ON A DAY LIKE THIS

If ever
We shall meet
It will be
On a day like this
Where I shine
From inside
With happiness
All around me
When my voice
Is smiling
And the pure sound
Will make you glad
When my eyes
Are deep blue
Like an ocean
And you can sail
On it
Into my soul
A day
When I´m just myself
Satisfied
With everything I am

If ever
We shall meet
Let it be...
...on a day like this


CORRECTED

You don`t accept
What I am
You don`t know
Who I am
You don`t see...ME!
What you see
Is someone else
You try to make
Me different
You force me
To be someone...I,
Don`t want to be
You kill my
Personality
You make me feel
Dead
Corrected
To fit into your life
Now you`ll be
Corrected
Out of my life!


UNKNOWN

Unknown
Are your eyes to me
Never
Did they catch
My picture
Unknown
Is your mouth to me
Never
Did your lips
Meet mine
Unknown
Is your skin to me
Never
Did it enjoy the touch
Of my hands
Unknown
Is your voice to me
Never
Did it`s timbre
Reach my ears
But why then
Does it feel
So known to me?


That`s it for this time....(hope you enjoy these too, cocoknight...:D)

Akashary;)

[JustBecause]

Once again, love them! You truly have a gift. :)

[Sam]

:eek: I really loved them. It's as if you reach inside the readers heart and mind and put it all into words. You really should be published.;)

[Akashary]

When I really reach the readers like this, it`s reward enough for me! Thank you all!!

Akashary;)

[Akashary]

Well, was some time again since I had some space to write, cause I was on nightwatch again, but here I am with some new stuff for the ones who are interested....

SILENCE...IN MY EYES

The world around me
Is coloured
Everything is moving
Round
And round
But today
I´m like a
Blind woman
I don`t see all this
My thoughts are...
In darkness
It`s silence...
In my eyes

Like an undead
I move this body
Of mine
Through the day
Not realizing the sunlight
Moonlight?
I don`t see
All the people
Expecting my reaction
My thoughts are...
In darkness
It`s silence...
In my eyes


SINK YOURSELF,SHIP!

Am I crying?
Are these tears...
Floating down my skin,
Wetning my face?
Is this sound...
These sighs interrupted
By gulps,
Coming out my throat?
Is this me...
Face down
In the pillow?
Is THIS me?
Being so definitly
Weak
Where is the woman
I used to be?
What ship had make her...
Sail down this river of
Tears?
You damn ship!
Go....and sink yourself
But not me...NOT ME!


UNINVITED

Hands
Their touch turn my skin
Into a whirlpool
Of emotions
That drive me
to an undying
Insanity
Lips
Their kisses make me go
on a journey
Though the wilderness
Of my body
Head to toe an endless
Ride
Skin
That is moving with me
Exchanging liquids
That are gliding
Into a storm
Of an unbreakable
Heat

Uninvited
You came today
I was unable
To send you away


That´s it this time....

Akashary;)

[Lt.Mac]

if you have at least 40 pages worth of writing go to lulu.com and publish it!!! they will help you through everything.

[JustBecause]

Truly a poet! :)

[Akashary]

Dear Ladies,

I wasn`t here for a while, but that`s because I has a rough time. My cat , that lived with me since 14 years and that I got when she was six weeks old, was very sick and the vet had to put her to sleep in the end so she don`t had to suffer anymore. I wasn`t quite in a poetic mood since then, but I promise, I will give you some more stuff in the next days.

Akashary

[appeace]

My sympathies to you. It is always hard to loose a beloved pet and one should take time to morn and to remember all the wonderful times. We patiently await your wonderful work.

PEACE:)

[JustBecause]

I'm so sorry to hear that. May you find solace in your work.

[pukkie]

I am sorry to hear that from your cat.
My sympathies

[Sam]

:( Akashary I am so truly sorry for your loss Dear!! It is so hard to lose them. They become such an important part of our lives.
But you gave him a great life and maybe when you've had time to heal some you'll be able to give some other poor, lonely abused pup a wonderful home too.
Take Care Dear and take as much time as you need. We'll be here waiting when you start writing again.
(((((HUGS TO YOU!!)))))

[Akashary]

Oh my...thank you all for your thoughts and sympathies, that really means something to me!:)

I have , like I promised, something to read for you, but I`m afraid, it`s not so happy.....!

WHERE AM I ?

A sadness
Violating my thoughts
With a strength
Hardly to bear
A loneliness
Forcing into my mind
Slowly and cutting
Like knifes...
Drowned into my flesh
So exhausting to fight
So easy...
Just letting it do
It`s work
Threatning my heart,
My soul...my everything
Where are you...
To ease this pain?
Where are you?
Where am I?....Where am I?


SILENT TEARS

Not seen
Not even guessed
When I look back at you
You cannot imagine them
Invisible...
Silent tears

Without a voice
Without a sighn
When you look at me
You can see no pain
Inside they`re breakin`
Rivers of...
Silent tears

No emotion
No care
The words that are
Leavin` your mouth
Have caused the rain
I´m floating in...
Silent tears

Well, I think I maybe make you cry enough....

Akashary:rolleyes:

[pukkie]

Sad but beautiful

[Sam]

Tears flood the soul,
But only to cleanse; never to drown it.

Thank you for sharing those Akashary.
Even though they were sad they were heartfelt and beautiful.;)

[renate]

that's very touching :):)

renate

[JustBecause]

Loved them - as always. Straight from the heart...

[renate]

yes it is:)

Renate

[Akashary]

Thank you all for your support.:)

...and my mood is lightning up since the last writings....the next ones will surely be happier again. I just booked my birthdaytrip in December for London...that defenitly cheered me up.:D

Akashary;)

[Akashary]

Well then, to make a long story short...I had to work a LOT!!!!

....but here is something new to read.


TO BE LOVED

I`ve crossed the world
To love
And be loved
I`ve broken my heart
To open the wall
And be found again
I`ve sailed my tears
To be grounded...
...and hold anew
I`ve saved my dreams
To free
And live them
Passionately
I`ve kept my soul
In secret
To offer it
Completely to yours

Listen to these whispers
And just...
Love me


THE MAN WITHOUT A FACE

Hidden
In my dreams
Always in darkness
With these eyes
Of a colour
I never remember
With a voice
Always fading away
And not known
In the light
All together
Holding me
With so much
Of everything
I´ve always wanted
With the knowledge
Of all I need
And gone...
...when I wake up
The man I dream of...

The man without a face


DOUBLEFEATURE

PERSONAL
May be my space
But it`s nothing
Without...
You in it!
PRIVAT
May be my soul
But it`s incomplete
Without...
Yours beside!
INTIMATE
May be my thoughts
But they`re lonely
Without..
Your intervention!
CARING
May be my heart
But it`s helpless
Without...
Your care!
FULLFILLED
May be my life
But it`s still empty...
...without you!

So that`s it for now again, hope you enjoy these ones more than the last.

Akashary;)

[JustBecause]

Welcome back! I love them all.

The Man Without a Face really speaks to me because I have that dream from time to time. It is so maddening - whenever I'm about to see his face, I wake up. :o Sigh...

[Akashary]

Welcome back! I love them all.

The Man Without a Face really speaks to me because I have that dream from time to time. It is so maddening - whenever I'm about to see his face, I wake up. :o Sigh...

JustBecause....you really understand that poem:D

Somehow I hate these dreams, `cause I never have the shlightest clue, who it could be. Maybe I see him often in my real life and have no idea it`s him.....this is really maddening me!!

Akashary;)

[JustBecause]

Somehow I hate these dreams, `cause I never have the shlightest clue, who it could be. Maybe I see him often in my real life and have no idea it`s him.....this is really maddening me!!

I know how you feel. All I know is that he is much taller than I am. I know that because in one dream we had been sitting and talking, looking out over a landscape that was familiar in the dream, but not aftwerwards. Then we both got up. I was looking at about the middle of his chest. We were laughing at how short I was and I looked up to his face - and poof! I woke up. :mad: ARrrgggh!!!!!

[Akashary]

At least you know how tall he is.....all I know is just nothing!!!:(

Akashary;)

[Akashary]

Hi there,

here`s a special one for you....JustBecause!!:D (...and all the others, who like to read it)....


MY EVERYDAYS SELF

Waking up
With the sunbeams
Lightning my face
Still tired
Feeling another world
Then,...realizing
Another ones eyes
On me,...watching me
In my
Morning wake-up ritual
And reality arises
Without make-up
No well cared hair
No mask...
And a voice is saying
"You`re so beautyful...
...in your sleep!"
Accepting the truth
Of being loved
For what I am
In my
Morning wake-up ritual

I´m longing for
Your voice
Saying these words
My beloved man...
...without a face


Akashary;)

[Akashary]

Hmmmm.....grrrrrrrrrrrrr........!!!!

I´ve just been on the "Picture of today" thread and.....not that I cannot sleep now...(what`s NOT caused by the full moon!!),...it also reminded me of a poem I wrote some years ago. Even if it was not written for this purpose, somehow it fits the situation now!!:D

SOMETHING

I´m NOT WILLING to continue
Thinking of you
I`m NOT WILLING to continue
Dreaming of you
I´m NOT WILLING to continue
Seeing your face
In my mind
Feeling you
In my soul
But SOMETHING
Is seducing me
Is tormenting me
Is forcing me
Is lurking me
And even fighting it...
Strong and faithful
At the end
I`ll always loose...
Gladly

Good night and good fight.......Akashary;)

[JustBecause]

:eek: OMG!!!

Akashary, I can't believe you did that for me. I love it - thank you, thank you, thank you...it's wonderful! And, how did you know I'm pretty much a mess when I wake up? :) I hadn't really thought of him as beloved (because of hubby), but now - hmmm....

I like SOMETHING too.

You really should think about publishing. You are really, really, truly good! ;)

BTW, did I mention how much I like them? :D

[Akashary]

Hi JB,
it`s just my own feeling I put in MY EVERYDAYS SELF.....and I`m pretty much a mess myself when I wake up...so, it`s a kind of selfdiscription....without ...of cause....the man at my side!!
But I`m glad, that you can find yourself in it.:D

Akashary;)

[JustBecause]

Let me know if you decide to publish...I'd love to have a collection. ;)

[Sam]

;) You are so truly talented Akashary!
You guys should check into some books about dream interpretation. I think you'll find it a very interesting subject. I've never had one of those types of dreams. I did have a strange recurring one as a child though.
I was in a large hand-woven basket on the roof of our house and the basket slid off and just kept falling. I would eventually hit the ground but I was never hurt and then I'd wake up.
But it might have had something to do with me falling out of the top of a black cherry tree that I climbed as a child. I was hitting and grabbing limbs on the way down and somehow my older brother caught me. All I had was a few minor scratches and that tree was pretty tall. The dream stopped after that though..:confused:

[Sam]

Alone

I walked in the shadows
Never seeing the light.
I danced on shards of glass
Yet never feeling pain.
But onward I did journey.

I chased rainbows
Yet never saw their colors.
I grasped at dreams
Yet they eluded me.
But onward I did journey.

I peered into my heart
Yet found it cold.
I searched within my soul
Yet saw an abyss.
So onward I did journey.

I looked into the eyes of another
And suddenly I saw the light.
I felt the pain.
I basked in beautiful colors.
All my dreams stood before me.
With my heart burning like wildfire,
My soul brimming with joy,
At last my journey ends.


(Copyrights belongs to Cocoknight May 11, 2006. Please request permission before using.) )

[JustBecause]

Another poet!

Love it, Coco... :)

[Sam]

:D Glad you liked it Just Because. It's just something I dabble in from time to time but Akashary is the real deal!

[pukkie]

I like it Coco !
You have much talent! :)

[brilliant!MacLeod]

Hi Sam,
I just saw your poem - it´s great and I like it a lot. There is so much of real life i it ,put in wonderful words!!!:)
So we have a bunch of really talented members,don´t we?

[Sam]

Thanks Pukkie and Alex. :D I have my moments of inspiration.

:eek: You would be amazed at the talents in this group!! Both hidden and open!! It's awesome!!

[Akashary]

Coco....that`s really good!!!:) ...you`re welcome here to post more.

Hi girls....
well, I had some tough time at work and no time to come here, I was working and sleeping and sometimes I ate something...but....now I´m on vacation for ten days. On monday I fly to London and stay there over my birthday and I´m so looking forward to it. I wasn`t in London for a very long time and really missed that city a lot.
Sam....I will not forget you. So if you get something from Germany or England...hihi:D!!!
Here is something new to read.....

ALIVE

You smile at me
Like a beam of sunlight
Warm and bright
And the world...
Comes alive

You take my hand
Like a flame of sin
Tempering up within
And the world...
Comes alive

Your lips meet mine
Like a rush of wilderness
Leaving me a mess
And the world...
Comes alive

You cover me
With yourself
Everything feels right
And yes....
The world is alive


I´ll be back sooner this time...maybe with a lot of inspiration.....

Akashary;)

[brilliant!MacLeod]

Hi Leo,
I love your new poem and can´t wait to read more!!!!:)
I wish you a wonderful time in my favorite city,drink a good old english cup of tea for me and have a wonderful birthday!!!!!:)

[Sam]

:eek: Very lovely poem Akashary!! A present is great but knowing you are in such a fantastic place ;celebrating your Special Day and having a great time is the best gift of all! HAVE A GREAT TRIP AND BE SAFE!!;):D

[JustBecause]

Lovely - as usual.

Have a wonderful and safe trip!

[Akashary]

I´m back safe..and it was great....

...prepare to get some stuff to read Coco.....I wrote a card each day!!

Akashary;)

[Sam]

:D *Coco gives Akashary a HUGE HUG!* I am so Happy you made it back safely and that you had a great trip! ;) I have my reading glasses on and I can't wait to read about it!

[Akashary]

Dear ones ....

I have a question for all of you!!
Pretend...I would do a book....just one...handwritten....with all my poetry and some extras....pretend further...I would donate that one of a kind book to the next PEACE auction....would anyone bid on it????

Please....I would like to have honest and clear answeres about this question and as much as possible.

thanks a lot.....

Akashary:rolleyes:

[brilliant!MacLeod]

Hi Leo,
I would certainly bid on it!!!!!!!! Your poetry is great!!!!!!!!:)

[pukkie]

Hi Akashary
Your poetry is beautiful
I certainly bid to on it

http://i394.photobucket.com/albums/pp25/mukkie_03/Kerst/flower229.gif

[Sam]

;) Me too! And I know a few others that would also.

[Akashary]

Thanks girls...Alex, Pukkie and Sam,:D

...hm, but this are not as much answeres that I hoped for, so I have to deeply think about doing such a thing. Maybe it was just a totally crazy idea!


Akashary:rolleyes:

[JustBecause]

I'd love a copy of your poetry. That makes two things I'd like to have - Stephy's picture book and your poetry.

Besides, some of the best ideas are 'crazy' ones! :)

[Ambereliz]

Sorry that I am late replying as I didn't see the tread until just now. I would definitely bid on your book :)

[Akashary]

I'd love a copy of your poetry. That makes two things I'd like to have - Stephy's picture book and your poetry.

Besides, some of the best ideas are 'crazy' ones! :)

...thanks JB...and Amberliz...

...I will think about it ....maybe just doing something is better than to think over it too much is the better thing to do!!

Akashary:eek:

[Akashary]

[

...I will think about it ....maybe just doing something is better than to think over it too much is the better thing to do!!

:[/QUOTE]

...wow...too much "betters"...sorry about that!!

[EvanStar4506]

[QUOTE=Akashary;8822]Hi there everyone.....

Elements

My eyes are water
They spill it everywhere
Like a heavy rain
Drowning me
On a summer day

My mouth is earth
Growing all the words
Suddenly coming out
Like a sandstorm
In the Sahara desert

My hands are fire
Burning their marks
On whatever they touch
Like a flash
Coming down on a tree

My soul is air
Not easy to feel
Even harder to catch
Like a whisper
Following the wind

Elements
Enchanting my body
Leaving me
Like a house
Crashed by a tornado

Only ruins remain


I liked this poem very much. Good going! It would have been better to hear this poem at the Presidential Inauguration instead of the one they did. I didn't care for it.

[EvanStar4506]

Dear ones ....

I have a question for all of you!!
Pretend...I would do a book....just one...handwritten....with all my poetry and some extras....pretend further...I would donate that one of a kind book to the next PEACE auction....would anyone bid on it????

Please....I would like to have honest and clear answeres about this question and as much as possible.

thanks a lot.....

Akashary:rolleyes:


I have a book published at www.lulu.com it's free!

[Akashary]

Hi EvanStar,

sorry for my late answere, the cold-wave finally caught me and I was sick with fever and slept a lot.
Thank you, that you like "Elements" so much. That honors me a lot.
I will take a look at your book soon.:D

Akashary:rolleyes:

[Akashary]

OK...EvanStar,

maybe you should tell me under which name I can find your book!! If you don`t want to write it here...PM me. It`s really interesting me.

Akashary:rolleyes:

[EvanStar4506]

OK...EvanStar,

maybe you should tell me under which name I can find your book!! If you don`t want to write it here...PM me. It`s really interesting me.

Akashary:rolleyes:

That's nice you want to see it. But I was thinking it would be a great place for YOU to publish your work. :) You first register and then choose to publish. The site walks you through the process. It does take some time and commitment, but it's worth it.


My book is A Transparent Soul, if you type that in the search bar, it will show up.

[Akashary]

Hi Evan....,

I did look for your book and read the preview....impressing....I really liked the poems....good that your are published. Who likes my poetry surely will love yours ..too. We have a close style.:D

Akashary:rolleyes:

[EvanStar4506]

Hi Evan....,

I did look for your book and read the preview....impressing....I really liked the poems....good that your are published. Who likes my poetry surely will love yours ..too. We have a close style.:D

Akashary:rolleyes:

Thanks you are so sweet. I say go for it. The formatting and editing for the book to be published on lulu.com is a little time consuming. They do offer some services, but I wanted to do it all myself. I did have one first edition but realized some mistakes and took it out of publication and then created the second edition.
I think it's worth it all the way. Don't wait until you're fifty and still thinking about it. ;)
Jump in with both feet. The water is fine.:)

[Akashary]

I will think about your advice....thanks Evan...

Akashary:rolleyes:

[Akashary]

well, then seems my creative break is over.:D....so hi again everyone!!

THE DARK COAT

A dark coat
Of ignorance
Wound around me
And nothing
Can get through
To me
Sometimes
I wish I`d had
A coat like this
`Cause often
Ignorance is bliss!


MY FAVOURITE PERFUME

You
I take with me
Your scent
I wear
Like my favourite perfume
"Spellbound"
Is what I am
By the spirit
That is yours


SURROUNDED

The wind in my hair
And the rain in my face
But for me it`s ...
Your hands and
A lovely embrace
I walk the crowd
And smile at that noise
`Cause in my ears it`s
Your wisphering voice
You`re in my near
Althrough the day
Even...
When you`re more
Than far away
So feel arround
When you sleep
At night
Remember me...
`Cause I´m
At your side

....so that`s it again for this time. See ya...:D

Akashary:rolleyes:

[brilliant!MacLeod]

Hi Leo,welcome back!!:D

I´m glad your "creative break" is over!!
That was great!!!
I really love it!:)



Viele Grüße aus Süddeutschland!! Und ein schönes Wochenende!!

[Akashary]

Hi Alex,

it`s good to be back.

Akashary:rolleyes:



PS: Wie hat`s Kira in London gefallen?? Grüß sie von mir.

[Akashary]

Some new ones...

DANS TES BRAS

I find peace
Everything just falls
Apart
My mind emties
From all anger so far
When you take me...
Dans tes bras

I find silence
Every noise just leaves
My heart
My soul recovers
From every scar
When you have me...
Dans tes bras

I don`t need to
Be strong
I don`t need to
Be tough
I can just be a woman
When you kiss me
And make me laugh
While you hold me...

Dans tes Bras


THE CALLING OF A SIGH...

At night
I hear that calling
A soft, swinging voice
Hanging in the leaves
Outside
Shattered by the wind
A dark, lurking sound
A raising melody
Blinding my ears
With a smashing
Crescendo
That finals
In a sigh...
...and then...
Nothing
But sleep...silently


RE AND ACTION

What I do
Is the reaction of
What you do
To me
The way I react
Is the answere of
How you act
At me
The explosion that
Follows is
The result of
Both our actions
Sometimes positiv and
Pleasurous
Sometimes negativ and
Destroying
But always
Deactivating

...until...
The chainreaction
Starts again


....well, hope you have fun with it or enjoy it.:D

Akashary:rolleyes:

[brilliant!MacLeod]

:D both!!!:D

[Akashary]

Well then ...hi everyone!!:D

I know that none of you ever asked why I write poetry in english, BUT...I think I owe you that story for a better understanding of me and my poetry.

"After I´ve seperated from one boyfriend some years ago, I did a lot of chatting in the net. I was in under the nick "tigerleo" and just wanted to check out something unknown, so I created another nick that was "Akashary"( I wanted to take Akasha...from Anne Rice`s Vampire Chronicles, but it was already taken...!)
Well, as I surched the chatroom by being Akashary someone PMd me and asked me if I would be from India...in english. I checked out the someone and already decided, that he was much too young...(twelve years younger!!) when he pm`d me again. So I answered I would be german and not from India and why he would ask about it. It seemed by his answere, that the nick I choosed is connected to India and also an indian name....so he thought I would be Indian. To make a long story short...we started chatting.....nearly the whole night!!! I had not made a secret out of my age or my look...somehow we had connected. We were chatting then every night for two weeks. He was a student from India, studying in Karlsruhe(..a german town in middle-south of Germany...far away from Hamburg, where I lived that days!) and felt somewhat allone in this country. Then we started to talk on the phone too...and what should I say ....I fell in love head over heels..so did he. The first time he came to visit me...he made me a special gift. He wrote a poem for me and gave it to me in the first night we spent together. Believe it or not...never before someone did something that romantic for me and I just melted.
He knew, that I write songs and lyrics and read some of them and then told me, they were nice but not from the heart and with no melody!!!! THAT...was definitly a challenge and when he was back in Karlsruhe I started to send him "Good night poems" by SMS. That`s how "STILL (a lulleby)" was written, and as he got it , he never again said to me ...that my writings have no heart and no melody!!!.......And that`s the story of why I´m writing poetry in english. To make the story round I will give you the poem he wrote for me too.:o


FOR FEW IT`S LOVE BUT FOR ME IT´S YOU (by Krish)

When I spell your name with my tongue
It`s the lovely song which was sung
Hey the breathe of breathes in my dreams
My heart is lost to taste the love cream
The first and the last fear in love
Makes me wonder why and how?
You in my eyes, so never it close
Love can win with all it`s force
For few it`s love but for me it`s you
Your thoughts in my mind went on queue
Fall in love is a lovely saying
When you feel the love it gets the taming
Nothing is wrong in love and war
If it`s only you my hands reach for
When my whispers reach the lovely ear
Even thousand miles makes you near
When my words can mean you really alot
It`s not in my eyes but in my thoughts
When for few it`s love but for me it`s you
The words you left are always new


Well ...now you know why I´m writing and how the nick Akashary took form.
Next time ...I will give you then another of my poems.

Have a good night....Akashary:rolleyes:

[pukkie]

Akashary ,this poem is very beautiful

[brilliant!MacLeod]

WOW!!
That was great!!:D:):D

[Sam]

*Sigh...* Very lovely story Akashary! And I enjoyed the poem too.
But I disagree with Krish that your work doesn't have enough heart to it.
;) I know it had a lot of heart in it.
Besides...most poetry is best when it is written from very deep thoughts.
But when writing lyrics for music...one has to be careful not to go too deep or the listener could become bogged down in it. Most people listen to music that doesn't require them to think too hard.

[Lt.Mac]

sweetcakes, you just keep writing-
My creativewriting professor once told us "Never confuse the heart with passion, there are many passionate people in the world who have no heart."

Mac

[Akashary]

Thanks, Sam, Alex, Pukkie and Lt. Mac....

Yes, Sam, there is heart and soul in my poetry, but Krish was a part of getting there...don`t judge on him too hard.:D

Lt. Mac....I will never give up writing.....besides...you all here give me so much support...how could I.:D

Akashary:rolleyes:

[Akashary]

Here is something very new....

REALITYCHECK

It seems I have
A crush
On falling for the
Impossible
And as if that`s
not enough
The impossible doubles
And becomes quite
A laugh
I don`t know
If it`s just a guard
Some security for
My heart
Another wall I
Instinctively build
To keep the dragon
In shield
The only good thing
Of being lovesick
Is
It gives my creativity
A kick


DESERT

My life is a
Desert
Of emotions
So long I´ve not
Been touched
By them
Love, understanding...
Being there for others...
Is what I do
But non of it
I´ve experienced for
Myself
Such a long while

I wonder
When they will return
To my life
Instead of being
A walking, talking
Desert


MORE THAN...

Don`t think of me
As body
It changes and ages
Can be destroyed
And crippled
I am more
Than just body

Don`t think of me
As mind
It can be smart or dumb
Beautiful and evil
It`s corruptive
I am more
Than just mind

Don`t think of me
As heart
It can be lovely and open
Tolerant and deseased
It can be broken
I am more
Than just heart

Don`t think of me
As soul
It can be faithful and strong
Weak and without hope
It can be lost
I am more
Than just soul

Think of me
As
All or nothing
Everyone in everything
Because...I am
Body, mind, heart and
Soul
I am more than...
You can see

I am...
Fantasy



For this time bye....Akashary:rolleyes: